An excellent prelim task Katie, you have included many of the elements I was looking for, and have added lots of your own ideas and style to the film.
The evaluation is fairly detailed, you have discussed the elements like 180 degree rule and match on action and even mentioned when you used them.
In order to improve this work I would suggest that you:
Commented on what happens if you break the 180 degree rule
What went wrong that you can learn from in your main task.
How this project will help in your main task.
Feedback response:
ReplyDeleteI have taken on board this feedback and will improve my post about my Prelim Task.