Truth - 1st Cut Feedback

Feedback

Person 1:  Oliver, 16

• Very good 
• Some of the cuts shaky
• Upstairs movement
• Nice dolly work
• Use of incense- smoke effect
• Camera angles were interesting 

From this feedback, I can tell that my movie opening has good camera angles but some of the cuts are shaky and would therefore need to be changed to make the shots flow together. 

Person 2:  Becky, 17

• Variety of different shots
• Continuity - good story
• Shaky camera 
• Don't know where the story would lead 

From this feedback, it is clear that where the story would continue would need to be made more obviously in the opening scenes but the story that is revealed at the opening already, is strong and makes sense.

Person 3-Mitch, 16

• Good close ups
• Shaky
• Good angles and close up shots 

From this feedback, I can tell that my close up shots are good but the stability of some of the shots would need to be redone if we were able to go back and film again.

Person 4- Ash, 17 

• Variety of shots
• Different ages of actresses good 
• letter looks realistic
• good dolly movement 

From this feedback, I can tell that my choice of actresses were good because I was able to show to age ranges in my opening and that the dolly movement in one shot was very good and fluent.