Your analysis for a Rom Com has some interesting points, you have thought about some camera angles and the setting and mise en scene. However it is too vague on the rest of the areas you could analyse.
At the moment it is at a level 2 - in order to improve use the DISTINCT formula, come and see me and I will give you some more resources to explain this if you are not sure.
The Quantum of Solace analysis is more detailed, with good use of technical language like diegetic sound and POV shot etc.
However again you have not covered all of the technical code areas (SMEC) and not used distinct. I would like to see a lot more work go into improving these analysis as I firmly believe you are capable to producing more detailed and focused analysis.
Sin City is similar to the previous analysis, and again although there is a lot of good analysis you need to add more technical language and think about DISTINCT.
Level 3 (low)
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